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@ 2008-08-27 10:45:00
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The Oral Stage
Title: The Oral Stage
Author: [info]onewayfreak
Fandom: Kiss Kiss Bang Bang
Pairing: Perry/Harry
Summary: Just a little porn.
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 1000
Notes: My lovely beta is [info]simmysim.



I wouldn't call Perry difficult – at least, not to his face. No, he's not difficult; he's... he's a perfectionist. There are times when they seem to amount to the same thing in my mind, such as days when he makes me retype the same case file three times because, 'The phrasing isn't as clear as it could be.' But I guess I can't really fault him for being a little demanding when it comes to what we do in his bed.

See, I had to earn the right to suck Perry's cock.

It's not as weird as you might think. It's not some fucked-up kind of reward system or a whips-and-chains-and-rules kind of deal. It's just that Perry, like most guys, has this thing about blowjobs needing to feel good.

I'm not exactly a 'natural'; I've accepted that. Life is not a porn film, though it would simplify certain matters if it were. So I had to experience a lot of, "I know you can open your mouth wider than that, I've seen it," followed by, "Fuck, cover your teeth!" and finally, "Ugh, God, just stop, it's not going to work."

I can't say it wasn't a bit damaging to my ego (what tiny shreds are left, that is), but you know how people talk about how you always want what you can't have? They're right. So Perry let me keep trying, whenever he had the patience (his words), and now, finally, this one is looking good. There were a few hisses and warnings (it's really hard to keep your teeth covered when you're getting lockjaw, OK?), but he's let it go on longer than any other, at least, and that's a good sign.

"Ah, Jesus Christ, Harry-" Fuck, I love that. That hand in my hair, gripping, keeping my head down, even though I'm almost choking. Who would have guessed that I'd love that? I've been kidding myself for thirty five years.

I attempt to show my gratitude with a low moan, and my reward is Perry's fist tightening in my hair, his body going rigid. I pull back fast; the last thing I want is to choke on his come and miss the experience. I've fucking earned this, damnit.

I'm distantly aware that I'm humping Perry's mattress, which, I don't know, should probably be embarrassing, but then I hear him groan above me and all thoughts of anything besides Perry's cock are lost.

Perry tastes good, really good, and I think I'm whimpering as he floods my mouth. I haven't exactly tasted a lot of semen in my lifetime, and I honestly would be surprised if there was a huge difference from man to man, but this is Perry, it's Perry's come I'm tasting, and that tastes really, really fucking good.

I try to resist digging my finger nails into his leg as he jerks and moans, kind of fucking my mouth through the end of his orgasm. I'm beyond restraint at this point, and I can't stop myself from grinding on the bed, so I go with it, spreading my legs a little, rubbing on the mattress like I haven't done since I was fourteen. I don't take my mouth from Perry's cock until he, somewhat forcibly, hauls me off, and I'm so close to coming that it'd be pointless to move, so I rest my head on his thigh, breathing heavily through my nose because I haven't swallowed yet, I'm not losing this taste until I have to.

I know he's trying to get my attention, he's trying to pull me up but if he'd just give me a second--

"Hey," He pants out hoarsely, hitting my shoulder, "What the fuck's the matter with you?" Perry's version of, 'Are you OK?'

I don't answer, I can't, it's not worth it, because I'm about to lose it and I'm swallowing his come a little at a time, and it's too good to stop.

"Harry," He tries again. I moan and shake my head, rubbing myself faster on the sheets and starting to feel that dull ache of desperation. I could have come by now if he would just stop distracting me. "Harry, get up here."

It sounds like an order, and so with literal Herculean effort, I raise my head, swallowing reluctantly and sliding up Perry's body.

"C'mere." He slides his hands around my waist and pushes one leg between my thighs, and I moan gratefully; I don't have to be told twice. My cheeks feel hot, but embarrassment is so low on my list of priorities right now that I can't bring myself to care that I'm actually humping Perry's leg. I bury my face in his neck, whimpering, Jesus Christ, licking at the little drops of sweat that are almost as good as his come. It's a credit to his character that he doesn't mock me when I shoot all over his thigh and stomach not five seconds later, groaning shamelessly against his skin, nearly passing out with the force of what should probably have been a passive orgasm at best.

The only thing that stops me from completely losing consciousness is the thought of the cigarettes that I threw on the bedside table earlier. Perry doesn't normally let me smoke in his bedroom, but sometimes, if I get it lit before he notices, and if he's still in that brief post-orgasm haze, he lets it slide.

Sluggishly, I roll off him, watching as he throws an arm up to his forehead and sighs. Lying on my back and slowly (though probably not subtly) reaching out to the nightstand, I ask, "How was it?"

"Mmm. I think you'll do."

I laugh, removing a smoke from the pack and reaching out again for the lighter I'm sure I saw next to the lamp.

My fingers have just made contact with cool metal when the cigarette is plucked from my lips. I turn my head in time to watch Perry raise an eyebrow and pointedly crack the little white stick in half.

"Learn to deepthroat," He deadpans, flicking the two halves at my chest, "Then we'll talk."




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[info]ennui_blue_lite
2008-08-28 02:12 am UTC (link)
Oh. Dear. God.

I love this hugely. Seriously, it's fantastically hot, and Harry is so enthusiastic, and...oh. I love the idea of Harry having to earn the right to suck Perry's cock. I know Harry said it wasn't a sub/Dom control thing, but I like to think of it that way anyway. Harry is so Perry's pet.

Really. Really. Hot. I've gotta go check out your other fics.

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[info]onewayfreak
2008-08-28 02:17 am UTC (link)
Here's a secret: If I had it my way, it would totally be a D/s thing - I just don't like to run into a fandom with that flag flying, as it sometimes scares people off. :D

Unfortunately this is the only KKBB fic I've posted, the rest of my stuff is House MD, sorry! I do have some other KKBB stuff that's not quite finished, though; they'll go up whenever I can get them done.

Thanks so much for the comment!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :D

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[info]ennui_blue_lite
2008-08-28 02:33 am UTC (link)
I don't think anyone would be scared off - I drew a D/s Perry/Harry not long ago, and no one got upset. And if nothing else, if you write and post a D/s Perry/Harry and happen to scare everyone else out of the fandom, I'll review enough to make up for all of them.

Double that if you have Harry wearing a black leather collar.

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[info]onewayfreak
2008-08-28 02:35 am UTC (link)
LOL it's great to know I'll always have an audience!

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[info]pensive1
2008-08-28 03:41 am UTC (link)
I know you can open your mouth wider than that, I've seen it

I heard Val Kilmer saying this in my mind, literally.

"What the fuck's the matter with you?" Perry's version of, 'Are you OK?'

HILARITY. BECAUSE IT IS TRUE.

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[info]onewayfreak
2008-08-28 04:09 am UTC (link)
Oh wow, I'm ecstatic I was able to get his voice down, thank you so much!

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[info]pensive1
2008-08-28 05:33 am UTC (link)
TOTALLY EFFING NAILED IT

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[info]edda
2008-08-28 03:47 am UTC (link)
Filth! Filth and perversion!

Quite good it is, too.

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[info]onewayfreak
2008-08-28 04:11 am UTC (link)
It makes the world go round, my friend. Thank you!!

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[info]relupin
2008-08-28 02:25 pm UTC (link)
GUH!

It would be totally fine if you got bored and decided to write something like this every day. Yeah, that would be fine. ^_^

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[info]onewayfreak
2008-09-01 05:41 pm UTC (link)
That's good to know! Next time I'm bored, I'll keep you in mind. ;)

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[info]noctuabunda
2008-08-28 06:10 pm UTC (link)
gnfrdlgst.
Uhm, yeah. I think I overheated for a second there. Wow.

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[info]onewayfreak
2008-09-01 05:46 pm UTC (link)
Haha I hope you survived. :D Thank you for the comment!!

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[info]anchoredfreak
2008-08-29 06:25 pm UTC (link)
you're a pretty sexy lady, em.

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[info]onewayfreak
2008-09-01 05:47 pm UTC (link)
You're a beautiful boy, you're a sweet little lid, but I am a woman.

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[info]le_red_queen
2008-08-30 05:55 pm UTC (link)
yay! Quality KKBB fic! And I love the (not so) subtle reaching for cigarettes comment ending in the tragic snapping of said cig :D

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[info]onewayfreak
2008-09-01 05:50 pm UTC (link)
Perry will never understand a smoker's pain. Thank you!!

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[info]viciouscats
2008-08-31 09:00 pm UTC (link)
Guh. So hot! :)

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[info]onewayfreak
2008-09-01 05:50 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! :D

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[info]simmysim
2008-09-01 05:52 pm UTC (link)
WHAT I LIKE BEST about this is how you wrote Harry, how shameless and desperate he is.

BUT THE OTHER THING I like best is Perry, and how much of an ass he is, but the THIRD THING I LIKE BEST is both of them together and how kljfgadf against his thiiiigh.

this is ridiculous levels of hot, I'm soso glad you are writing for this fandom.

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[info]onewayfreak
2008-09-01 07:00 pm UTC (link)
:DDD I'm very very glad you enjoyed it, pal!

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[info]xidiomaticlogic
2008-09-03 11:13 pm UTC (link)
This was freaking *delicious*. o_o;

I agree with you on the D/s thing, as well. When done properly, it can be INSANELY hot with these two - particularly since it isn't really a planned thing on their part, it's just how their relationship works and it comes across as loving and positive. The "Harry is totally Perry's pet" thing, I mean.

And oh god, I love Shameless!Wanton!Harry so much.

Er... again, to finish off the comment: in Harry's defense, it is TOTALLY hard to keep your teeth covered when you're getting lockjaw. And, um, to my credit, it only takes SOME of us a few minutes to learn. XD

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[info]onewayfreak
2008-09-04 02:31 am UTC (link)
They're really quite perfect for D/s, aren't they? I tend to see aspects of it in all my favourite ships, but with these guys it's blatant and that's lovely. :D

Harry's just too impatient to try and learn the tricks. And Perry has high standards. :P

Thank you so much for your comment!

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[info]xel1980
2008-09-21 04:43 pm UTC (link)
Oh, this is so good!!!!! <3

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[info]onewayfreak
2008-09-29 01:10 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!!

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[info]rushhour
2008-09-29 02:13 am UTC (link)
I bet Harry really does have a constant narration of his life going on inside his head and during sex? This would be exactly how it sounds. Great job~ :DD

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[info]onewayfreak
2008-09-29 01:11 pm UTC (link)
Ha, I'm glad I got it right. Thanks for the comment!

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[info]hi_falootin
2009-01-12 05:19 am UTC (link)
I CAN'T BELIEVE I JUST SAW THIS ~*NOW*~

This is so, so excellent, Bone XD OMG, your Harry voice is just perfect. And hottttt.

I hope you don't mind getting comments on old fics lol. I just had no idea you'd written Kiss Kiss Bang Bang slash and that's just...such an excellent movie. I wanted to tell you how much I loved it <3

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[info]mozzerk8
2009-01-26 04:27 am UTC (link)
I really can't believe how well you wrote the characters!!
I could seriously HEAR Harry and Perry saying these things - You are.... AMAZING...

Super hot too - I LOVED Harry's desperation and shameless mattress/leg humping...

LOVE LOVE LOVE

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[info]mercyacross
2009-02-02 11:14 am UTC (link)
Dear god, women. That was ravishing, man.

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[info]mercyacross
2009-02-02 11:16 am UTC (link)
and by women I am of course implying that such a work of sexy fun could not be the product of just one dirty mind

ahem

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[info]crimsonquills
2009-02-06 09:12 pm UTC (link)
Mmmmmmm. God, I love it when the POV character is so into what they're doing with their lover. It makes it infinitely hotter.

Thanks so much for sharing this!

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[info]morgulq
2009-02-10 01:29 am UTC (link)
I love this but...well...I'm trying to read and "Every Sperm is Sacred" starts playing on my iPod.

*dies*

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